A story im writing but its not done give it a read and tell me what you think!

The Don’t Give a Damn Sisters!!
By: Miranda Jay Cooke
　
Who are we? We are the sisters who don’t give a damn! You can find us cruising in a red ford jeep singing along to HIGHWAY TO HELL. Our names??
Melina Sue: She’s all about fashion! We think she’d kill someone for wearing one of her outfits. But unlike most girls that love cloths she comes from a poor home.
Sara Rail: She’s has the hottest head. Mess with her and you’d wake up in serous pain…if you woke up at all. She was raised by her oldest brother because both her parents went to jail when she was just a baby.
Mesha Greg: She’s the smartest of our group. She was hacking into computers before she started school. Comes from an average family. She could of skipped a lot of grades but never wanted to.
Jennifer Mason: She’s the party girl! Also the first of my sisters. Has lived with her grandma after her and her brother got taken from their parents. She hasn’t seen her older brother, Tyler since.
Marry Newman: That’d be me… I’m shy and when I get a little bit of courage I say weird stuff. The other sisters say I’m the reason we got brought together. I say it was all him…
My first year at M.C Riley elementary was also my first day of 1st grade. Because I was so she I got picked on a lot, since I wouldn’t talk to the other children they took it as being mean. A few days after the first day a lot of kids where coming to beat me up. Suddenly a kid I recognized as the schools bully came over to and when the other kids saw him they walked away. He turned to me and said, “My names Tyler. I’m a fifth grader but I want you to be my friend.” I was confused when he said it. Because it was so weird and the way he said it with so much confidents shocked me. But from that day on we were. At the end of the day he introduced me to his younger sister, Jennifer she was my age. Like me and Tyler she didn’t have many friends. So the three of us became best friends. We shared our secrets and dreams. Hell we shared our lives with each other. But four years after we met, Tyler was beaten extremely bad by his father. Jennifer and Tyler were then taken away from their parents. Jennifer was sent to live down the road at here grandma’s but because of Tyler being a juvenile his grandma didn’t want the responsibility that came with him. So Tyler was sent away to foster care…away from Jennifer and away from me…

teen times #1

This is what i'll call my blogs when their about my life right now.
So today i found out my best friend is dating my ex. If it had been a different ex it wouldnt have mattered so much but i was in love with the guy. W/E I hope their happy. Im not the type of girl to make others fell bad just because im hurt. so i'll smile and pretind im perfectly fine. that the right thing to do. right? i mean if the world ends tomarrow do i want the last thing i felt to be hate. i dont. but if that wasnt bad enough now the whole school is hating me because my best friends new friend told the school a bunch of lies about me. Great rigth? then to add on to my stress i am failing school and my mom yells at me because people think im depressed(she says im just lazy and i probly am) Then to say more my older sister just had a baby and hates the baby dady so at the age of nineteen she lives here with her almost five month old. And my mom hates her new bf but everytime my mom and step-dad say something to her they all fight. dont get me wrong i love all my siblings (even though she is the hardest to get along with) and i love the baby but its hard to breath, to grow, or to be you with space in a world that fells like a closet clossing in. -sigh- but life is here. There is no stopping it and starting over, you have to keep going but mabe you can slow it down...
I have a big imagination. Or at least thats what i like to call it. Thats why i love to write! Writing and reading is a great way for me to be free and let go. In a story you can be who ever you want to. Thats why i love Petter Pan! -laugh- Think about it. In this day and age kids are being told to grow up to fast. Petters story however tells you to take your time. Mabe not forever but still dont rush it. I tried that resontly with somethings i shouldnt. Things no one should... but i didnt like it. I sisnt lose control like others i know and i stoped, while some that started when i did are still going. Even though idont talk to some anymore i still worry about them and pray they will be okay. Basicaly what im trying to say is...
1. PLEASE STAY AWAY FROM DRUGS
2. BE CAREFUL ABOUT SEX (protected or not)
3. LEARN TO FORGIVE (but not forget)
4. TAKE LIFE SLOW CAUSE IT WONT LAST FOREVER!
THANKS FOR READING! LOVE YOU GUYS! NEXT IM GONNA TRY TO WRITE A SHORT SCARRY STORY!
MANDYCOOKIE

About Mandy...

This is my first blog and I'm not sure what to say. I wanted to do this because i wish to be an author one day and my sister said this would be a good start. But where do I start...I come from a pretty big family. Two half sisters both older, one half brother who is older, an older step brother and a half little brother. And then there are two brother and sister inlaws. My mom has way more brothers and sisters but only grew up with her three older siblings. My dad only has a little sister. I'm alot closer to my moms familly because they have always lived real close by.
Heres something for all you who think im not interesting to you, my moms older sister married a man named Bryan then had a son, soon after they divorced and my mom started dating him. Guess who my dad is? Messed up right cause now my older brother is sort of my cousin too. I think its funny now that I'm older.
Another thing about me is I'M NOT GAY BUT I DO SUPPORT GAY PEOPLE! I told you that cause in the future i might be righting about them. I support them because not only is my uncle and one of my brothers gay but some of my best friends are too! So please dont hate me for my opinion cause I dont hate you for your's.
I also support cancer awareness. I want to also raise awareness by telling my grandmothers story on here. And i hope it will help raise the awareness for it and in the future help the cause. Another health thing I want to talk about in time will be my story of my surgery. Which i hope you'll like.
I will tell you many things on my blog, many storys to, but most of the time I'll rigth about my days in high school. THe drama, and life of an average high schooler in my town.
THANKS FOR READING! I HOPE YOU'LL KEEP READING AS I KEEP WRITING! LOVE YOU ALL!
MANDYCOOKIE!!